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Wednesday 1 July 2015

Frost Bite Rough Draft

P1 Frost bite
Once upon time there were three kids named Byron,John,Diamond and they were really popular.
One day they felt bored of working and wanted to play so the next day they found out a story about a !!!!!giant diamond worth billions !!!!!


For some weeks they planned out how they were going to do this and what equipment they were going to use. So when the day was right they set off to the icy mountains but For getting two important things those were the mountains were guarded by snow leopards and Snow storms were common there .


As they hiked they saw somethings were lurking through the Fog “what is that John” said diamond “i don’t know but it is big ” said John so they try to get a better look “its a leopard no its a snow leopard” They yelled “run ok” said John to Diamond and Byron “a cave” said John.


                    In the Cave
Now in the cave they found a map for the giant diamond but it's in another cave where the snow leopard was lurking. “What's those shiny things over there” They said “its some spears” said Byron “yay were saved” they said.
          
    !!!Fighting off the snow leopard!!!

Now we can kill the snow leopards “go now” said John "yeah we have found the diamond but there is still snow leopard chuck the spears" they said finally we have the diamond .
  

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