Once upon a time there lived a Leopard seal named Nick . He loved the ice cold water. and chasing fish and Penguins. But he was so big he crashed into the iceberg everyday. His favourite food was roast Petrel. Mr penguin was a Doctor . He helped Nick so much so he would not eat Penguins.
One day his Uncle Jack die after his birthday and aunty Jill look after him. Uncle Jack saw an Killer whale and Jill was a Blue whale. He had a cold and the next day he died. Nick had to live in fear if it might he die so he got strong and forgot all about it. He likes Jack so there were like brothers and they always play games .
You have some really good sentences describing what is happening in your story Shelford.
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